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Johnathan Reid's avatar

Brilliant writing. Evocation so raw it genuinely felt I was a doomed Queen saving my colony. The ancestral lore was a great touch.

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Hanna Delaney's avatar

Really powerful.

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Leanne Shawler's avatar

Wow. I’m go smacked.

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Leanne Shawler's avatar

Gobsmacked even (thanks autocorrect)

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The Old Portension Account's avatar

I like "go smacked". That sounds like something the cool kids would say. Much appreciate you reading.

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Leanne Shawler's avatar

If only I was a cool kid…

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The Old Portension Account's avatar

Thanks so much for the notes. Much appreciated 👍

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